Response to teacher feedback

I am pleased with my feedback as I am on my way to achieving a band 4. To  improve I am going to read through all of my posts and correct the phrasing and the grammar so that it makes sense. I will also write what I would like to use in my own trailer, and how it will improve my trailer idea. I will analyse my mood board further as well as any other posts that I think need it. I will try to use different theory's to do with audience and narrative, to show my understanding of them.